Tuesday, February 9, 2010

In Flanders Field.

In Flanders Field
In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.

We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved and were loved, and now we lie,
In Flanders fields.

Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.

John McCrae

How does this Poem make you feel? What emotions do you feel when you read it?

- this poem makes me feel sad and bad because it is talking about the dead soldiers as poppys blow over the crosses. this poem triggers my emotions because it is hurtful and sad to read about war poems and thinking back how many people died for our country.

What is this poem about?

- this poem is about the dead soldiers laying in flanders fields as poppys blow over the rows of dead soldiers that fought for our country. it is also talking about leaving memories and there thoughts in the sky.


List some of the descriptive words the poet uses and explain why they are effective.

Some of the descriptive words that the poet uses are
- Quarrel, faith, scarce. These words are effective because it puts outs a better message using more interesting words rather than using short words.

Why do you think the poet wrote this poem? What was he/she trying to achieve?

i think that the poet wrote this poem to remind people that the soldiers that fought in war will never be forgotton and if people wanted to pay their respects they could go to flanders fields.i also think that he was trying ti get to peoples head about how many soldiers died trying to fight for our country and not many people actually knew how many people actually passed away while fighting this war.


Write down your favourite line/lines from the poem. Explain why you picked them.

my favourite lines from this poem would have to be:

Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky .

They are my favourtite lines because row by row between the crosses poppys are laid and set free marking their importance in the sky.

Does this poem ryhme?

No it doesnt.

2 comments:

  1. Shoshuna,

    I am glad that you found the poem, "In Flander's Field" so moving. Now, you need to go back through your post and proof-read and edit your work carefully. There are a number of silly errors, like punctuation, spelling and capital letter mistakes, that need to be addressed.

    As well as this, it is disappointing to see how far behind you are in your homework. You need to recitify this ASAP please. If you are having difficulty with what is being expected you need to ask for assistance.

    I will give you until Friday to catch up on missed work.

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  2. Shoshuna,

    You have still not done anything to rectify this situation. You need to address the homework issue ASAP. I will send an e-mail directly to your school account and will be letting Mrs. Grehan know that you are behind in your work.

    Please ensure that you ask questions if you are not sure of expectations, etc.

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